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Darva Chan, Cruelty Queen of Classical Piano, is here!

Usually I write directly on the computer, but in August and September I spent a lot of time working outdoors, carrying a notebook to the park to enjoy the summer weather. And when my new femdom story started taking shape in that notebook, I realized it was so visceral that I had to write it completely by hand first, to feel the passion of the imagined moment transmitted from my fingers through my pen to the paper…

I think writing by hand is a way the writer can feel as if he or she is “drawing” the story. You can glimpse what the story physically feels like through the scrawled words…

The hastily scrawled words reflect the urgency of the slave's emotions as he gets strapped.

“He didn’t want to run away, but take everything this beautiful amazing female creature would dish out.” The hastily scrawled words reflect the urgency of the slave’s emotions as he gets strapped!

 

But this story started in an image, inspired by a picture by the photographer “bloodua” at the stock agency www.123RF.com (see his portfolio here) that I kept thinking about for months, wondering who the young lady would represent in my fiction-writing mind. All I knew was that she would be a classical pianist, and into femdom.

Or, as I put it in my description of the ebook on Amazon:

Darva Chan is a gorgeous, haughty, and wealthy Chinese-American girl in New York City who desires a career as a concert pianist–and then discovers the pleasures of sexual domination over men.

She decides to link her virtuosity at the keyboard to her budding skills at spanking, whipping, and verbal abuse–and makes plans to go on tour as The Femdom Goddess of the Piano!

She turns a website writer named Jason into her groveling slave as she prepares to debut her new dominatrix/pianist persona with a performance of a famous piece she has newly dubbed “The Femdom Sonata.” Jason, in awe of her Asian allure and great talent, is willing to do whatever necessary to be near Mistress Darva: to sleep in a cage, to scrub her toilet, or to become her humiliated creampie cuckold. But then he finds something he CANNOT do for his mistress, even as she plunges him deeper and deeper into submissive degradation. Will Mistress Darva give her awestruck new slave a break so he can keep on serving?

That’s what I dreamed up out of this incredible picture, so I hope you’ll read and enjoy my new 45-page novella…

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It’s available on Kindle at Amazon stores worldwide!

 
 

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The Awesome Allure of AstroDomina

I came across this the other day on Twitter and couldn’t resist ordering the video:

Believe me, friends, it took willpower not to email her with an instant declaration of my submission!

Believe me, friends, it took willpower not to email her with an instant declaration of my submission!

 

“Wanna be my slave?” asks the popular AstroDomina in her tweet. “Sure!” says my libido, wagging its submissive tail. She’s so gorgeous and breezily dominant in the way I find most attractive. Also, I’m always so struck by how she would be perfect casting in the role of the dominatrix in a video version of my LEARNING TO BE CRUEL ebook series on Kindle and available at Amazon worldwide. The shopgirl who originally inspired the domme looked much the same physically, and the character of Miss Meirong, as I first wrote her back in early June 2011, has the same type of intelligently kinky playfulness, spiced with luscious evil, that AstroDomina exhibits online and in her videos.

The first appearance of Miss Meirong: she forces her admirer to eat a hamburger like a dog.

The first appearance of Miss Meirong: she forces her admirer to eat a hamburger like a dog.

In this sequel, Miss Meirong has her slave do gross things with his unruly member while in a bookstore!

In this sequel, Miss Meirong has her slave do gross things with his unruly member while in a bookstore!

In “Slave Training: Dinner Is Served,” AstroDomina decides to feed her lucky slave. At first she is alone on her throne in the dungeon, dressed in latex and boots, as she chews and then spits a banana, gummy bears, and a Pop Tart into the slave’s “Man” bowl, and then drenches the mixture with chocolate syrup.

She has the blindfolded, gagged slave brought in to kneel before her. After the blindfold and panty-and-duct tape gag are removed, she scoops out some of the gross concoction and feeds him a little bit of it like a patient but condescending mommy.

Then she upturns the bowl and, after binding his arms behind him, has the helpless but awestruck slave eat his gunky meal off the floor while she keeps his face pressed down with the sole of her boot.

Although in real life the idea of feasting off a floor is my notion of a most repellent repast, in a femdom clip it is very exciting to see this gorgeous Asian mistress express such domineering cruelty with a pitch-perfect TONE of roleplay virtuosity. In these screencaps I made, observe the play of emotions on her face. Emotions create the tone.

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Indeed, tone has a lot to do with the success of clips–the wrong word, a too-harsh inflection, and a femdom clip can go from a thrilling kinky game between men and women into the realm of emotional massacre. Instead, AstroDomina skillfully moves through a range of moods as she deals with her slave. And there are touches of humor too where the basic absurdity of the situation inevitably amuses both mistress and slave. AstroDomina looks like a lot of fun to do a scene with.

The video is straightforward with masterful visual shorthand. For example, because the slave is older, paunchy, and utterly ordinary looking, with a soft belly and butt, we instantly are meant to understand that his place in the natural erotic hierarchy would be BELOW such an alluring creature as AstroDomina. We don’t need any long backstory or dialogue to comprehend this.

In a short story, of course, it might be interesting to read what lead this gentleman to his current state of submission!

After his “meal” he is left, naturally, with the duty of cleaning up any residue from the dungeon floor, as well as washing the dish, while AstroDomina haughtily strides out.

If you’d like to contemplate for yourself more of AstroDomina’s scenarios, check her out on Twitter @AstroDomina or at her Clips4Sale store, and be lead into her cosmos of domination as I have been through this “Slave Training: Dinner Is Served.” If you can, tell her Irv O. Neil sent you. But be aware that the normal state of daily life can feel awfully dull after exposure to AstroDomina!!

So let’s see now…what clip will I order next?

 

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Although I personally made the screencaps to illustrate my analysis, all the images of AstroDomina and her slave from “Slave Training: Dinner Is Served” are ©2015 AstroDomina.

 

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Sardax brings visual life to one of my beautifully cruel heroines!

It was a long week of writing. I just got back a couple of hours ago from dinner with a friend down in Union Square. What an unbelievably bustling place it is, especially at night. The lights from the stores, the sounds of traffic, the rush of walkers and cars, the constant interweaving through masses of people on the asphalt. As I walked my friend over to catch his bus afterward, my eyes were constantly enraptured by the many beautiful young women, especially Asians. It is strange and terrible to have them so visible to me, so palpable in their charms, and yet to be myself so invisible to them. But such is the fate of the ordinary looking middle-aged man.

This feeling of unworthiness and yearning before the eroticism of the vibrant young Asian female is one of the emotional currents running through my femdom story Learning to be Cruel, which I published just about one year ago in Kindle ebook format on Amazon, and which continues to steadily sell.

Although I am not an artist, I designed this cover myself and it captures the spirit of my dominant heroine. As I have said many times on this blog before, I have chosen to do the covers this way because I want the ebooks to evoke the homemade quality of the underground fetish booklets that used to be a staple in some of the adult bookstores around Times Square, and which have become prized collector’s items. Ideally, I should make printed copies of my stories for those who’d like to read them in traditional form, and I may do that at some point in the future.

Recently I started corresponding with the great British femdom artist Sardax, who illustrated a few of my short stories back in the Leg Show magazine days of editor Dian Hanson in the 1990s and early 2000s. I wrote a story for him entitled The Pit,  which was inspired by a picture he did, and which was published on his site The Femdom Art of Sardax. I sent him a copy of Learning to be Cruel just for his interest, and he liked it and decided to make an illustration of it for the site.

He recently joined Twitter at @sardax and has posted two stages of the illustration as he develops it, and which he has allowed me to share here.

I like how the picture is developing, how the tilt of the head in the second step emphasizes not only her dominance but also allows the light to better bring out her Asian features. Ah, a femme fatale is emerging!

Although this scene does not illustrate an actual occurrence in my story (although it does take place in a restaurant and there is much humiliation of the man with food and drink by the woman), I said to Sardax that this could have happened–and she could have poured her drink on her leg–if the restaurant in the story were bigger and the tables weren’t at such close quarters! In any case, it captures the feeling of the story.

It’s fun to see an artist take the story into another possible direction in his interpretation. I’ll post more of these steps in the illustration of Learning to be Cruel as Sardax posts them on Twitter.

And, if you’re curious to read the tale yourself, visit my Amazon page here. You’ll can also find information about my other Kindle ebooks here.

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LATE BREAKING NEWS!

I feel like I’m in an old Warner Brothers newspaper movie here. Just as I finished this post, I saw that Sardax posted the final version of the illustration on Twitter. So let’s stop the digital presses and show it here:

The man now looks more like the character Lester in my story, younger and less bulky, and his expression accurately reflects the mix of desire and ambivalence in Lester’s feelings for the powerful, manipulative young woman named Meirong–which means “beautiful face” in Chinese.

As for Meirong in the illo, I’m ready to get down on my knees for her myself…in a restaurant, Union Square, or wherever she chooses! 🙂 Her shadowy full thighs in particular beckon my ardent worship…

Alas, I am afraid she would find me a very disrespectful slave. Perhaps she would have to slap me?

I also like that there is now a very subtle smile on the edge of her mouth in this final version, which reflects her delicious mockery of Lester in the story.

Anyway, before I go off into my reveries, let me remind you that you can view the full-size illustration and read an extract of my story inside the members’ area at The Femdom Art of Sardax!

LATEST DEVELOPMENT–SATURDAY AFTERNOON 6/30/12!

Like any dedicated artist, Sardax often tweaks his work in an ever-evolving state of beauty, and has added a couple of more refinements to the illustration. It’s up now with my story excerpts at his site, so I hope you’ll check it out and enjoy the contrasts in various versions. Let us know how you like it by leaving your comments here or via his site.

 

 
 

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